xanthan gum

umm does this poem have a meaning? do the trolls and billings and such and such represent something? because if they did, i didn't get it. on top of that, ...

despite the many spelling mistakes, it was great. you have a perfect rhythm that is very fun to read aloud, and it also had a point - it wasn't some ...

it was a bit choppy, but i really do love your poetry. it's very descriptive but still holds purpose and point. intravenous rain clouds wow. and the last stanza - ...

(sorry so short but i don't have much time.) i loved these parts: the spirits stirring their gentling faces turn The ruined brick dwellings dripping with dead never to be ...

well, this was a rather awkward poem, though the ending was really good. but announcing your characters before hand... - maybe it would've been better if you explained more by ...

I’m sitting in a blackened room Tying knots in golden thread The smile that I’m lying in Is glossed with my glittered lead And you’ve found me all but dead ...

Here are the fabled laurel leaves A smile, when it’s fading – Golden in the threadbare past While you constructed little ditties They knocked together temples of stone But now ...

wow i loved the poem. i really liked how you did the little intro-thing, which his what i guess you could call it. it was great and set the point ...

(this is just an exert from my story "God and War". In it, a boy was just shot a wounded through an apage mouth by an agressive officer dubbed "master." ...

As fruitful as regret Looking away from whatever life begets I’m turning away I’m holding sway Over the whole world And I’m trying to slice it down into proportion Photo ...

ehh i guess i would understand it more if i knew the back story to it. it was rather brief and didn't strike a chord with me. i got the ...

it was very creative and clever, and i loved the point of view it was told from most of all. for some odd reason, though, i didn't like it as ...

this is very forlorn. i sort of liked it. i loved the ending of the last stanza the most, and the second stanza was "ehhhh". but the first wasn't bad ...

beautiful. really. constructive critizism. in fact, us poets' should all learn a bit from you to write about the more simple things in life. :D i don't even LIKE oranges!

i loved it, but i don't think it really showed "maturity", nor "immaturity"...not really. I didn't really get any level of maturity about it - i didn't...er...think it was ABOUT ...